Each of the notes were very detailed and informative. Through glancing at each of the articles, the important parts of the written are present. However, all the background information relating to the article is at the beginning of the following response. As long as all the information is there, there's no concern, but try to keep all the factual information about the article in the notes so the response can be specifically for reflection.
As I said before, the responses give further information about the article and thoughtful analysis. There could definitely be more content in the responses, but the existing material is excellent. The readers want to know what the author feels about the topic, and the response is the perfect place express your opinion.
You did a great job not only sharing the various environmental problems, but also giving solutions and ideas. The next step is to keep that balance of content. Try to elaborate on different types of alternate energy. You discussed solar thoroughly, so maybe move in to nuclear or hydro. Keep an eye on Google News and other sources for the newest advancements in this topic. Your individual posts are related in a way so that the reader can follow your thought process.
Visually and technically your blog is perfect. All the links are live and the citation is proper. Although it is not required, I would suggest adding images or statistics to give depth to the blog. Everything is complete and posted, and there are even a few extra features. You are off to a great start.
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